Today I spent 10.5 hours at work trying to get the store ready for the big-wigs coming in tomorrow. This was followed by a 10.5 hour day the day before. Needless to say, I’m a bit burned out and the week just started. Bwah! My homework assignment today was to improve on my assignment using 1 ink color block and type only. The theme is some sort of charitable theme. I chose Animal Adoption. Here’s the first draft which consists of 9 thumbnails:

Here’s the next draft. I followed the directions of the prof. and class and tried to make the layout a bit more “friendly.”

I like the second draft quite a lot better. It’s a lot more serene, but I’m not sure if it still conveys the importance of the message?
